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Within the marble walls, we built
A city made of stone;
The pillars were our pillows and
The dome became our throne
As underneath the murals brushed
Into the ceiling-sky
We stood and sung our raging song
And raging rose our cry
'Till all the posters we had hung
Shook with some unseen breeze--
And I can hear still, if I would
Our echoing reprise.
We marched awhile 'neath the sun
But longer through the snow
Around we went, around we went—
Now wither will we go?
They ask me and I do not know
Though there must be somewhere
Not near as beautiful, I think
Nor with a snow-fall's glare
But maybe where our laden tracks
Can beat into the ground
And like an oft-repeated prayer
Our sound will e'er surround.
Within our marble hearts, we built
This stirring voice I hear
From fossils in the soaring steps
From sight fearless and clear
Though near a hundred years have past
Since stony eyes were bold
In life, as they are now entombed
Within their stony mold:
Not blank beneath their furrowed brows
Carved out with chisel strokes;
Not worn into a softer gaze
As wear the weathered oaks.
We marched awhile for untold goals
We could not then express—
They pressed against each sense with such
Disquieting distress
That set my fears into my hands
'Till they were shaking too
As my legs quaked within the storm
That we were wand'ring through--
The flakes of snow adorned our hair,
We were adorned with red;
But no-one followed in our wake
And no-one in our stead.
Within the marble world, we built
A city made of life
For we from cattle had become
The heroes of the strife
Oh follow, friends, oh follow us
Remember well our days!
And do not be content to sleep;
Do not remain to graze
The dying grass of withered fields
When there is so much more
And we have left undone all that
We once were fighting for.
A city made of stone;
The pillars were our pillows and
The dome became our throne
As underneath the murals brushed
Into the ceiling-sky
We stood and sung our raging song
And raging rose our cry
'Till all the posters we had hung
Shook with some unseen breeze--
And I can hear still, if I would
Our echoing reprise.
We marched awhile 'neath the sun
But longer through the snow
Around we went, around we went—
Now wither will we go?
They ask me and I do not know
Though there must be somewhere
Not near as beautiful, I think
Nor with a snow-fall's glare
But maybe where our laden tracks
Can beat into the ground
And like an oft-repeated prayer
Our sound will e'er surround.
Within our marble hearts, we built
This stirring voice I hear
From fossils in the soaring steps
From sight fearless and clear
Though near a hundred years have past
Since stony eyes were bold
In life, as they are now entombed
Within their stony mold:
Not blank beneath their furrowed brows
Carved out with chisel strokes;
Not worn into a softer gaze
As wear the weathered oaks.
We marched awhile for untold goals
We could not then express—
They pressed against each sense with such
Disquieting distress
That set my fears into my hands
'Till they were shaking too
As my legs quaked within the storm
That we were wand'ring through--
The flakes of snow adorned our hair,
We were adorned with red;
But no-one followed in our wake
And no-one in our stead.
Within the marble world, we built
A city made of life
For we from cattle had become
The heroes of the strife
Oh follow, friends, oh follow us
Remember well our days!
And do not be content to sleep;
Do not remain to graze
The dying grass of withered fields
When there is so much more
And we have left undone all that
We once were fighting for.
Literature
The reaver of my fate is me
Bittersweet sound emerged from plucked strings, music that expanded in the room around me and soon filled my whole world. Music that carried me away from the here and the now and provided me once again with the means to travel to places far far away, to the there and the then. Music that was instantly transformed to melancholy.
Pictures and smells and sounds of my forever past future overwhelmed me. My senses were being betrayed by my own mind. I was suffering fusillades of memories I could never have, being the memories of events that never happened. Memories of events that could never happen. And yet, I'd longed for those events so eagerly
Literature
She Wants the V
And her V is for Victory
Because she still hasn't won it for herself
So someone must tell him:
There will never be a Dicktory
Because you can't lose
If you're making the rules
~G.K.
June 14 2014
Literature
Master of Fate
Ten years a warrior,
Ten years near hell's door.
Ten years of death in mud,
Covered deep in blood.
Deep in his heart
A son of war,
Never before with no sword in hand,
Shackles broken, left alone to stand.
Ten dead laid around him,
Eyes deep in varied terror.
Bodies hurt limb to limb,
His expression deep and grim.
Others go day to day
Without a single change.
But this man, this monster full of hate-
He is the master of his own fate.
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Another ballad! I am getting kind of addicted to ballads. So if you haven't seen my journal ([link]) know that I am looking for some basic plot suggestions so I can write even more.
Anyway, I would like to know what people think of this, so here are a few questions:
I don't like the title. Any better ideas? Or is it fine?
Should the comma in the first line be there? (and in all repetitions thereafter)
Should the poem continue after the first 6 stanzas?
Is the ending too much a cliche?
Can anyone catch the allusion in here to another (very famous) poem?
Favorite line/image/stanza?
Do you like my ballads, or should I write something else for my next poem?
And, as always, any other suggestions/comments/critiques would be most helpful.
Thank you!
(for thewrittenrevolution: [link])
Anyway, I would like to know what people think of this, so here are a few questions:
I don't like the title. Any better ideas? Or is it fine?
Should the comma in the first line be there? (and in all repetitions thereafter)
Should the poem continue after the first 6 stanzas?
Is the ending too much a cliche?
Can anyone catch the allusion in here to another (very famous) poem?
Favorite line/image/stanza?
Do you like my ballads, or should I write something else for my next poem?
And, as always, any other suggestions/comments/critiques would be most helpful.
Thank you!
(for thewrittenrevolution: [link])
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