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So I have been having an interesting time. My oboe cracked about a week ago, and to shorten a very long story, it basically means that I will be extremely busy in the coming weeks--so not sure how much time I'll have to work on poetry.
But I have just finished a longish ode (fav.me/d4oacnz) and have three sonnets to post, though two are very similar. I will be interested in hearing your opinion about which sonnet is better.
I've also made progress on my Arthurian poem, though not as much as I would have liked. I'm pretty sure it will take me another year to finish, at the rate I'm going. If you're interested, though, I could post the beginning of the introduction here--I'm pretty happy with that part, at least.
I've also decided to post some drafts of my poems; the first is up (fav.me/d4obxmd)--a handwritten draft of Sonnet XIX. I thought people might find it interesting, and it's probably good for me to keep records of this in a more organized place than my multitude of school notebooks. If anyone has questions about how I write/view/edit poetry, feel free to ask! I'm not pretending to be at all competent at it, but I can at least offer my opinion.
Also, would people prefer that I explain my inspiration, motives, etc. for my poems, or that I forgo all that, as I do now? I am wondering because I notice some artists here explain more, and I want to know if you find that helpful or distracting.
Anyway, thanks for all your support and I will be posting those sonnets soon! In the mean time, I would be eternally grateful if some kind people would like to tackle my ode to help give me some feedback. I am just not happy with it.
Thanks again!
MW
But I have just finished a longish ode (fav.me/d4oacnz) and have three sonnets to post, though two are very similar. I will be interested in hearing your opinion about which sonnet is better.
I've also made progress on my Arthurian poem, though not as much as I would have liked. I'm pretty sure it will take me another year to finish, at the rate I'm going. If you're interested, though, I could post the beginning of the introduction here--I'm pretty happy with that part, at least.
I've also decided to post some drafts of my poems; the first is up (fav.me/d4obxmd)--a handwritten draft of Sonnet XIX. I thought people might find it interesting, and it's probably good for me to keep records of this in a more organized place than my multitude of school notebooks. If anyone has questions about how I write/view/edit poetry, feel free to ask! I'm not pretending to be at all competent at it, but I can at least offer my opinion.
Also, would people prefer that I explain my inspiration, motives, etc. for my poems, or that I forgo all that, as I do now? I am wondering because I notice some artists here explain more, and I want to know if you find that helpful or distracting.
Anyway, thanks for all your support and I will be posting those sonnets soon! In the mean time, I would be eternally grateful if some kind people would like to tackle my ode to help give me some feedback. I am just not happy with it.
Thanks again!
MW
Update on Defense of Gawain
Hey everyone,
I have a (possibly?) exciting update. "The Defense of Gawain," a poem I have been quite seriously but extremely sporadically working on for the past 5 years now--which I realize seems completely insane--is almost completed.
The poem is now around 70 stanzas, which to me doesn't actually seem too long. It is in four parts (possibly 5--I haven't decided whether to split the last section yet). Anyway, I do intend to post the completed poem here, in sections. The second section will be up after a bit more editing, but look for it in a week (or even a bit less).
Meanwhile, I'll share the current titles of each section. We have:
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Back from my unannounced hiatus--sorry about that
Hi everyone,
You may have noticed I haven't been active in a couple months, and I'm very sorry both about that and about not mentioning anything until now. To be honest, I have had a lot of very time consuming things to deal with in the past half-year and just didn't feel like dealing too much with poetry and writing.
But I am back, and I promise to at least let people know if such a thing happens again!
Anyway, thanks for all your continued support, and most recently for my second DD--I am unbelievably honored.
Thanks again!
MW
Summer Break! (Anyone want critiques?)
I have finally finished all my papers, finals, &c. and am done with school for the summer! :) So to celebrate, I am offering to critique some works. And don't worry if you don't have the critique feature--I am just as happy posting it as a comment. It's pretty open, but here are some guidelines:
1) Poetry only--I don't feel confident enough critiquing anything else.
2) Preferably short(er) poems, but this is very flexible.
3) Preferably formal poetry, but again, I don't really care.
4) Post a link to the poem here, or note me. If I don't respond in a week, send me a note reminding me!
And please remember that these are critiques--so e
Rossetti's Sonnets: On Petrarchan Sonnets
So I decided that what I really needed to be doing with my time was going through as many of Rossetti's sonnets as I could find, and figuring out all the rhyme schemes used. For those who aren't familiar with Rossetti, Christina Rossetti was a poet associated with the Pre-Raphaelite movement in Victorian England. She wrote a lot of devotional poetry, and a lot of sonnets (almost all Petrarchan). She is also one of my favorite poets.
Anyway, this was basically a way for me to take a small sample of Petrarchan sonnets and see what was traditionally possible to do in terms of rhyme scheme. Petrarchan sonnets are typically more flexible than Sha
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If you're interested, though, I could post the beginning of the introduction here--I'm pretty happy with that part, at least.
Definitely interested!
I like reading about people's inspiration - I think it's interesting, but you don't have to if you don't want to. I only do it sometimes, myself.
Definitely interested!
I like reading about people's inspiration - I think it's interesting, but you don't have to if you don't want to. I only do it sometimes, myself.